Word: Ill Seen, Ill Said.
Naked, I dive in. Seaweed tendrils circle my legs, tickling the back of my knees, coaxing me down. I plunge again, lungs gulp-full of air. Little particles move like dust motes across my path. My arms break them into a swirling, eddying torment.
Now, I go deeper, my lungs starting to hurt, the water darker, cocooning all around me, stilling my senses. My head lightens. And I wonder if what’s left is the real me or the adrenalin talking. But I feel loose, meant to be underwater, happy to give it all up and let the undertow take me.
The water flecked now with glitter. Without deciding, I’m moving back towards the sun on the surface. And I’m there. Gasping and spluttering for breath through smiles, exhilarated and beat. I look back at the boat; yesterday’s bikini still drying in the sun. I flip and turn, kicking further out. I’m not ready to go back to all that yet.
Thanks to Jane of Ill Seen, Ill Said for this week’s edition of Word! You can check out guest posts from past weeks right here.
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Jane Flanagan
September 8, 2009 at 3:03 pmThanks for asking me to participate Kelly. It was fun!
Kelly
September 8, 2009 at 3:06 pmI didn't realize until after I had already posted it, but your words are perfect for the end of summer 🙂
xo
Kelly
chelsea
September 8, 2009 at 3:09 pmGorgeous. Jane has such a gift with words.
Laura
September 8, 2009 at 5:14 pmBeautiful, Jane. It is perfect for this time of year!
Tommy
September 9, 2009 at 2:51 amWhat a great idea for a post! And Jane, what a beautiful submission. 🙂
jen jafarzadeh
September 9, 2009 at 11:37 amwhat a neat series! and I loved reading Jane's post — totally could visualize the words.
Jill
September 10, 2009 at 1:39 amnice writing, jane! your words perfectly describe being underwater. now i'm sad that swimming season is over…
The Lil Bee
September 13, 2009 at 9:57 pmWow, that was really beautiful. I love this one!