Word: concrete and honey.

You may have thought this to be a romantic gesture.
Just as you may be surprised to learn.
That I am not part of this memory.
This girl isn’t me.
Do you not wonder what you were trying to hide?
Does she know you cut off her head?
She’s wearing red.
I don’t. I’d never.
Even though I feel like I’m bleeding.
I do like they buttons though. I bet you do too. The way they curve with the shape of her ‘topography’.
Where is this gate? Where did you take her?
Don’t bother answering.
I won’t be around to hear your response.
She’s too young. She wears ribbons in her hair.
What have you done?

written by Nicola of concrete and honey

12 Comments
  • jenX

    November 10, 2009 at 4:37 pm Reply

    i love it.

  • karey m.

    November 10, 2009 at 7:56 pm Reply

    gasp!

    must. re-read. promptly.

    {my heart is racing! an excellent response.}

  • bekah

    November 11, 2009 at 1:00 am Reply

    love it! i read that like it came from my own head.

  • concrete & honey

    November 12, 2009 at 11:44 am Reply

    what gorgeous comments – thank you so much ladies – and thank you Kelly – am honoured to be on your amazing blog.X

  • concrete & honey

    November 12, 2009 at 11:44 am Reply

    what gorgeous comments – thank you so much ladies – and thank you Kelly – am honoured to be on your amazing blog.X

  • concrete & honey

    November 12, 2009 at 11:44 am Reply

    what gorgeous comments – thank you so much ladies – and thank you Kelly – am honoured to be on your amazing blog.X

  • leslie

    November 12, 2009 at 7:12 pm Reply

    wow nicola.
    you are one talented lady…

  • Simply Mel

    November 12, 2009 at 9:55 pm Reply

    brilliant!

    Words always leave me gasping for air because they are the truest definition of a thought-provoking soul.

  • meandering pearl

    November 13, 2009 at 7:25 pm Reply

    "I don’t. I'd never.
    Even though I feel like I'm bleeding." if i was being totally transparent id say i feel like i know what that means! heart words & a gorgeous blog!!! kindest wishes

  • Krista ...

    November 13, 2009 at 7:54 pm Reply

    OK so, these "WORD" posts might be my very favorite! they're beautiful.

    and maybe this is uncouth to offer, but if you ever need a writer for one of these posts in the future, i'd love to be considered. it's such an interesting exercise. i actually did something similar on my blog recently. you can see it here: http://haystackoflight.blogspot.com/2009/10/i-used-to-think.html

    anyways, maybe that's tacky to offer. if so … i apologize. i'm just totally taken with your blog. :)

    have a great day!

  • Anonymous

    December 29, 2009 at 8:31 am Reply

    amazing stuff thanx :)

  • Anonymous

    December 30, 2009 at 4:06 pm Reply

    You are a very smart person!

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